衆英語大神請進，求助！ 本人粗略的寫了一份實習評價，自己只有CET6 550的水平，請各位來幫忙糾正下語法和

本人粗略的'寫了一份實習評價，自己只有CET6
550的水平，請各位來幫忙糾正下語法和不地道的詞彙
謝謝
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