雅思範文保護傳統建築

題目：

The government is responsible for protecting a nation’s cultural identity. Thus, some people believe new buildings should be built in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

範文：

These days,different ways are being taken to protect cultural ously, not onlyis much contribution made to maintain old housesbut alsorules of laws associated with cultural protection turn out to be better. Some people even say that new houses are right to be set up same as traditional ones.I seem to be one of opponents who believe thatthe action can be unsuitable in our world.

One of the main reasons is thatmost of traditional buildings, in my nation, that are capable of fewer people is hard to meet the demands for housingasincreasing numbers of people pour into the ared tolast decade, today’s population has doubled and even trebled, which puts serious pressure on housing a result, old houses must be substituted for new ones that have more efficient utility,let alonevery traditional ones.

No doubts thatbuilding or maintaining traditional buildings are very essential to raise art sense and increase choices of people’s , these old housesare believed asvery important resources to attract international ver, the proportion of traditional houses has to be under control,and otherwise the housing of citizens is badly affected.

Overall, my view is thatcultural identity is so precious that more efforts and measures should be taken but carefully. The excellent tradition helps with deep understanding of history, and educates rthelessa simple and reckless behavior. that new houses are built in a typical way does more harm than goodin the improvement of people’s being.

Organization + Contents：

1st

提出社會問題+證明問題的存在+爲了改善問題出主意+好主意還是壞主意，考慮何處

2nd

自圓無罪其說有理+在解釋爲什麼的`時候，談到具體的社會現狀

3rd

猜測這個觀點的初衷1、2條+侷限性是重要的（限制條件+危害）

4th

表明對社會問題的態度+原因+談談觀點的優勢或危害