大學英語四級考試寫作典型範文的點評
It can be discerned that the American students prefer to read the popular novel rather than other kind of books, such as the nonpopular novel, the books of technology, poem and so on. The percentage of the popular novel current is about 68.2%. Other kind of novels current is, reletively , about 16.8%, 8.3%, and 5.2%.
It is not hard to think out why the popular novels can attract so many students. The popular novel is interesting, and not so abstract as books that full of the mathmatic formulate. However, as university students, study is the first task for us to do. So we should pay more attention to the books about our major. Fictions may color our life, but it can not be the key part of our studying life.
Personally, I would like to spend my free time in reading books about my major, such as technology digests, computer newspaper... Because I want do to a good job in my subjects. Fortunately, my dreams come true, meanwhile, I ve gained other things--I found a solid basic knowledge about my majormake me feel easy to contrive the electronic circuit which have to be done during our bachelor years. Thanks to those books!
點評:
切題。
論證比較有力,表達思想清楚。
文字通順,連貫性較好,但有個別語言錯誤。
注: 文中劃線部分爲原文的一些明顯語言錯誤,括號裏的爲修改建議,爲保持原文面貌,對於結構沒有做過多改動。
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